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Death Consumes All : Soulcarriers
Contributed by
Depression-chan
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Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 09:12:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A burning inferno of color and light A road less traveled for those of the night With wings of leather and voices of screams Darkness overpowers the best of dreams Our claws ground sharp and our teeth stained red We whisper of how our victims have bled Their pain gives us energy to persecute them more We are encouraged farther as they sink to the floor They hold out their hands to beg for a second chance They are ignored as we slip into a feral trance Though we kill anything tame or wild No blood tastes better than that of a child A blood so sweet it is almost unreal Nothing surpasses they way a child's blood feels As we gather souls and destroy lives We pay no attention the strangled cries We worship the dark for it is our leader We are taught not to fall for any type of pleader With a heart of fire and eyes of ice Creatures like us are called anything but nice Off we fly with a mission to complete I just wonder how many people I can eat...
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Re: Death Consumes All : Soulcarriers
(User Rating: 1 ) by muffins on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 10:41:29 PM AEST (User
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I must say I believe this is a well put together poem for being so tasteful and twisted... like noodles! :D |
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Re: Death Consumes All : Soulcarriers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voyager on
Sunday, 2nd January 2011 @ 04:03:37 AM AEST (User
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Wow! that was powerful...almost like a war cry!! Well put together! If you say with a deep husky voice or sing it over a nice riff it would be an awesome song! Nicely done! |
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Re: Death Consumes All : Soulcarriers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jussy74 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2011 @ 03:17:14 PM AEST (User
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I absolutely love your way of writing, you are very descriptive and manage to capture my emotions with your pieces. |
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Re: Death Consumes All : Soulcarriers
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 05:46:08 PM AEST (User
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slip into a feral trance
Excellent Excellent
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