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silence
Contributed by
DKNY
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Monday, 3rd January 2011 @ 12:34:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The most beautiful moment of the day
when you waited for a person to say
But he remained quite and embraced 'silence'
The dreamy castles of sand
with a wave that reached the end
Even they vanished by a severe 'silence'
Autumns and winters are the seasons
That never changes because of a reason
And flips by an unexpected 'silence'
Tough life with infinite questions
searched for reasonable solutions
And succeded by a word 'silence'
Uncountable stars at the twilight sky
Reminded me of things that made me cry
And I was given the weapon 'silence'
Copyright ©
DKNY
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2011-01-03 12:34:44]
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Re: silence
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by Anoo on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 01:09:13 AM AEST
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I love the way you started the poem. It shows patience and hopefulness. 'when you waited for a person to say
But he remained quite and embraced 'silence' '
As I understand there is an indirecet sense to the poem. I like what is not directly said in the poem. Silence can sometimes be deafening. |
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