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Beautiful
Contributed by
JChimo
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Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 09:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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im so glad I met you, im happy your in my heart.
i just wish we werent miles apart.
the bond we have is strong, which is why we will last long.
your my heart, your my soul
your so damn beautiful.
i miss ur smile
i miss ur kiss
i miss ur touch
i miss ur voice
i miss you!
i wish you were in my arms
i wish u were by my side
i patiently wait for the day i can see you again
so i can softly caress your skin.
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JChimo
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2011-01-07 21:29:05]
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Re: Beautiful
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 03:01:47 AM AEST
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It's good in essence, but the choice of words rather makes it generic.
I'm sorry I don't mean to insult you or offend in any way, but that's what I get of it personally, but when I had my girl I messed that up, so maybe you're doing it right lol. |
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