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ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
Contributed by
emystar
on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 03:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It's loves way to become sound.
Life's little miracles warm our souls.
Steadfast we're sturdy,stand alone,
As lives tender moment's steady roll.
Sitting here, memories
round, round, round.
Child like feelings
sound, sound, sound
Bringing strength
round-n-round-n-round.
Right now this fleeting moment,
Love rolls on forever to capture.
In any way we have to savor
Joined each day in loving rapture.
Angels round forever to love.
Life is so magic beyond forever.
Grab hold and feel no gravity.
Nothing but pure life we savor.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2011-01-08 03:37:06]
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 06:50:22 AM AEST
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Emy
This is wonderful. The rhyme and flow is so smooth it seems to leap off the page. Another beautiful piece of writing. |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 09:14:36 AM AEST
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Sweet Emy, this is wonderful. It's so nice to see your work
still emantaes smiles and warmth. I've missed it, and you
my dear friend. Lovely to be back and sharing beauty such as this.
~ Breezy
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 09:57:03 AM AEST
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My favourite lines in the poem:
"Grab hold and feel no gravity.
Nothing but pure life we savor."
Just so powerful and relieving. Those two lines resonate freedom and delight. |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 12:30:34 PM AEST
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Oh Emysatr what profound in meaning this wonderful poem is. Makes you aware of the fleeting moment that is at the same time part of eternity and to be treasured and used for God's glory.
Stunning work Emy./
Be blessed
Love and hugs
Elizabeth |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by hungarianhaze on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 02:18:09 PM AEST
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Round n round is the perfect title for this poem..its such a cycle but so rewarding.
Beautiful ! |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 12:53:19 AM AEST
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woo-hoo, I be jammin! Me likes!  
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by spooky on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:28:27 PM AEST
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wonderful write, full of truth, well written
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 04:58:59 PM AEST
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yes love is magic
and
you are love
so
I guess you're magical baby. |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 03:15:51 AM AEST
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| A very pretty poem :p I like your style. |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 12:05:23 PM AEST
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This was a fun poem to read.
Keep it up.
-Kara |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 05:43:48 PM AEST
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| Love, angels and memories work together for good reading, nice write, good meaning, and a positive feeling. |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 09:24:18 AM AEST
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Love rolls on for ever
you are such a romantic
good stuff.... |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:49:01 AM AEST
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| Love comes around :P nice poem. |
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Re: ROUND-N-ROUND-N-ROUND>>>>>>>
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by hungarianhaze2 on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 08:57:36 PM AEST
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| I love this Poem a cycle of many things gone and yet to come |
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