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Fallen Away
Contributed by
Darbi
on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 09:14:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Its the smell of descending gold
The silent wisper of the leaves that fall
Warmth of the cooled breeze
It momentarilly lingers
And your heart skips a beat
Causing everything else to freeze
The birds still fly singing with glee
As trees sway missing most of their leaves
Whats left of them cling despratly
Not for long since snow will soon come
After that sun too melt it away
Giving birth to new life
In return of the life it had earlier taken away
Copyright ©
Darbi
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2011-01-09 21:14:51]
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Re: Fallen Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 10:19:53 PM AEST
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| Flowing words, philosophic. Very good write. |
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Re: Fallen Away
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by shanat on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 09:51:14 AM AEST
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the first 4 lines i loved, but it then lost me,
i love your style, love your work |
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