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I must try..
Contributed by
Darbi
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Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 01:40:50 PM in AEST
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I need to stop and think i must pause and see
the air that swells inside my lungs
does not yet choke me
i need the chance to breathe once again
without action i will become nothing
but nothing will become of me
ill crawl to happiness if takes more than i get
my walls of thorns have only decived me
i must follow sweet insanity
i will indulge in amnity
turn to the ideas that i fail to fathom
find truth in lies and color in ashen skies
im revealing that my soul is somthing out of my control
fate will overtake me
and soon i must take my place
only then can i figure out whats next
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Darbi
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2011-01-10 13:40:50]
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Re: I must try..
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 03:07:24 PM AEST
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only then can i figure out whats next
Very interesting write.
Blessings,
emy
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Re: I must try..
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by euphoema on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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i feel this poem..it speaks of what we all feel at times.
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