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My Eyes
Contributed by
vr2776
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Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 01:34:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my eyes see the confusion
that lingers in my room
my eyes can see beyond
from what it is that I can do
my eyes can see us falling
falling down and falling apart
my eyes can't seem to save me
save me from my broken heart...
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Re: My Eyes
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by FlintHunter on
Tuesday, 13th September 2011 @ 04:58:38 PM AEST
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Contributed by vr2776 on Wednesday, January 12 2011 @ 13:34:09 AEST
Topic: Emotional Poetry
A stirring and well-woven pair of stanzas. A poem from your heart. I wish i could help... but maybe writing helps -- i'm glad you have given us this poem to read! Fine words!
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