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The Magic's Gone
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 10:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Look at the mess
we're in....
confusion burns
back to square one again,
you think I am not trying
and
I think that you have turned cold.
I don't know what to believe
you say
you don't know what you need,
frustration has replaced bliss
sensations no longer flow
the magic's gone.
can you look me
in the eye
give me a real smile
and tell me
that you are satisfied,
lets stop talking about whose to blame
and figure out
what we need to change.
I just don't know
if we should try to fix something
that keeps going wrong,
what kinda of life is this
maybe
we should leave it alone.
sensations don't flow no more
I know you can feel it
the magics gone.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
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2011-01-12 22:02:49]
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Re: The Magic's Gone
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 04:35:02 AM AEST
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| Well done. This is perhaps your strongest write to date. I love the ebb and flow, really well constructed. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: The Magic's Gone
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:26:47 AM AEST
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Been there.
Unpleasant place. |
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Re: The Magic's Gone
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by RyanS on
Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 11:13:33 AM AEST
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| few words but with such meaning! |
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Re: The Magic's Gone
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th February 2011 @ 09:57:43 PM AEST
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Well that's how it gets if we don't pay attention.
Life is fleeting at times.
smiles,
emy |
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