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Consumerism and the individual
Contributed by
Zeberdee
on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 05:02:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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In the burning rage of a young man
stands an irreversible pain
covered in the lies and deceit of the land
it moves and screams at him to stay sane
to not abandon values to not let go
but he is on his knees begging
not to go to a new low
Its suffocating presence disarms
the handcuffs of his mind begin to let go
tumbling out is all his lucky charms
as his soul evaporates in the thin air
he rises born again without impair
And thus a new consumer is born there
Copyright ©
Zeberdee
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2011-01-14 05:02:40]
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Re: Consumerism and the individual
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by Voyager on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 08:19:58 AM AEST
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| Very interesting write. I liked it. Stayed true to being ambiguous. Well written. |
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Re: Consumerism and the individual
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by Bolts on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 03:39:26 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, great structure and rhyme, I like the ambiguity of it also. Really good write!! :) |
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Re: Consumerism and the individual
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by poetryislife on
Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 01:27:36 PM AEST
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What this poem is
come on man / lady I have read it 3 times to understand it, it mentions something as a nature in human-being. If I will write more, I will not finish from writing about this poem, but please, as an advice and I am not a professional poet, try to keep using this style of writing in your next poems.
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