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I dont like titles
Contributed by
RyanS
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Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 07:53:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Behind these eyes have always been ocean, never mistreated
Once I left you, the waves have crashed and became depleted.
Now we dont talk as much and our eyes barely meet, but dont be mistaken
There's not one single thought that goes by that you're not first place in.
I can be your molding clay to twist or turn, pull or bend
But one position that's still very hard for me is to just be your friend.
Not one single feeling for you has changed, not one memory diminished
That's why it's so hard to accept the fact that "we" are still finished.
You have picked me up and dropped me down time and time again
Ever since, my final words at night have ended with "Amen".
Yet this is no sad story, my heart has been eternally filled
Nothing could have made me happier, I couldn't have been more thrilled.
YOU are the reason why I'm here, the purpose I was made
That's why I'll never leave but this time I have to fade.
Far off into the distance, but still within sight
Just because you can barely see me, doesn't mean I gave up the fight.
So here is where I wait, until you decide upon what you want
I'll just be sitting right here, eating a buttery croissant.
Copyright ©
RyanS
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2011-01-16 19:53:04]
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Re: I dont like titles
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 08:20:55 PM AEST
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Well you certainly underestimate the power of your own pen.
You did an awesome job with this write.
blessings, welcome to YPDC,
emy |
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Re: I dont like titles
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 09:14:12 AM AEST
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when one write on how one feel,
one would be surprise of what is reveal.very good my friend.wow! |
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Re: I dont like titles
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 06:35:38 PM AEST
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| no..it is not a jumbled mess of nonsense at all..i think you will actually find many who can relate to these very words..i know i have been there before.. |
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