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Thankful Eyes
Contributed by
karoody
on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
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It lasted fifteen minutes
I was in a rush
Heading through the halls
Of a dreary nursing home
In attempt to brighten days
Of a few lost souls
During the holidays
A feeble utterance
Reached my ears
"Help me," was the strained plee
The voice from a little lady
Also in a hurry
To hear the cheerful singing
Of a small group
Accomplishing more than they knew
I stopped to realize
Her feet could hardly carry
This tired body
Weathered by the days
Spent roaming these lonely halls
I took her arm as we walked on
No longer caring if I was late
We finally reached our destination
With no time to spare
But this now tired lady
Needed to settle into a chair
I held her hand as she lowered her hips
Unheard words parted her lips
Nothing said in voice
Her eyes softened
And loneliness faded
As a heartfelt thank you
Streamed down her cheeks
I walked to the front of the crowd
Singing loud and proud
And was nearly overwhelmed
By what I witnessed next
Forty eyes danced along
With the same unheard thank you
Taking the lead
From a little lady
Who was out of the lonely halls
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-04-23 02:35:00]
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:43:44 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading that, it shows that you don't always have to do alot for someone to appreciate it. Keep writing.
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:52:52 AM AEST
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| Touched by a little lady before singing carols.. and her thankful voice touched your joyful heart.. very nice remembrance. beautiful write.. I appreciate you dear friend. venkat |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 08:22:02 AM AEST
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what a beautiful write...it brought tears to my eyes...even the smallest kindnesses are greatly appreciated.
Shari |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 10:16:58 AM AEST
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Bless you dear heart.This is beautiful!! It made me cry. It brought back memories of my grandmother and a trip I took too the nursing home around the holidays. Oh this is a touching poem.Pulled my heart strings for sure.
Michelle |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:35:30 PM AEST
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Thank-you....
I loved the poem and the message it conveyed. It truly shows what is important in life.
Great write. |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by wazarov on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:26:03 PM AEST
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| i discovered here your soft soul and heart, real human is speaking in you, you are wonderful. |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:56:07 PM AEST
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| oh Kara...this is beautiful... |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 05:06:26 PM AEST
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gee whiz, I'm touched. and it takes a whole lot to touch me. splendid write karoody
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 05:08:35 PM AEST
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hey forgot to mention, when I read the title, I was, like wow...how does he/she get it to last 15 mins?? :>)
Nawtee One |
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Re: Thankful Eyes
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by Apartment213 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:34:23 PM AEST
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| this was a very sweet poem ur so full of grace kara |
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