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And Thats When....
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:10:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Its when we roll on the trampoline and you tackle me to the ground its when you pin me to the bed and tickle me useless its when I laugh so hard I cry its when you laugh so hard the tears run down your beautiful cheeks its when I jump up onto you and you catch me in your arms so strong its when you hug me and swear you will never let me go its when you gently touch me sometimes and send shivers all around me its when you randomly kiss my cheek and Im happily surprise its when we just look at each other and smile, just because we are happy its when you give me that cheeky look and I become suspicious, but Im still smiling its when I sit alone and cry because you lied its when I clutch the blade in the hand and squeeze it for relief its when you tell me your sorry, youre so sorry over and over its when Im so angry, but Im so sad its when we row and you storm to the other side of the room its when we both look round and veer toward each other its when we stay standing and hug and promise again never to let each other go its when everything is fine again, because we are that strong its when you call me a midget gem and a pumpkin and all those cute names its when I buckle on the floor with what a wimp you are its when I bury myself into you its when I steal you jackets and t-shirts and run about wearing them its when you call me cute and laugh at how big they look on me its when you kiss me right on the top of my head, and tell me how beautiful I am its when we part for mere hours and I clutch your jacket as if it were my lifeline its when I stare into pictures of you, and remember how handsome you are, as if I could forget its when we meet back up again and embrace each other in a hug with meaning its when you know exactly how im feeling its when I know how your feeling too its when you know I need to be held it when I know all you needs a hug its when you tell me you love me. its when I tell you I love you. And thats when Im in love with you.
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Re: And Thats When....
(User Rating: 1 ) by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:26:13 PM AEST (User
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You obviously have a very complex relationship with your biscuits...seriously I commented on this before and still really like it there's obviously much more going on than that,You've captured the many facets of a relationship in this write, the good and the bad.
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Re: And Thats When....
(User Rating: 1 ) by pat517 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 04:23:20 PM AEST (User
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very good it reminds me of good times i am happy you feel this way everyone should |
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Re: And Thats When....
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 01:11:41 PM AEST (User
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Nice and sweet. its great to notice the amazing little things that the ones we love do. |
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