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Its in the eyes
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
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Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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your hair looks great
I bet you could even get a date
your smile no one can beat
I would kick them in the seat
you say your okay
and your clothes shout "lets play"
you really thought, didn't you
you've fooled everyone...till now
...but...
you forgot one thing
you can't hide you eyes
and your eyes tell no lies
so tell the truth
how bad is it?
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Jilli_bean
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2003-04-23 04:35:00]
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Re: Its in the eyes
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:46:21 PM AEST
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this poem is a lil confusin to me... this site doesn't usually give critiques... only supportin comments such as good write... i feel this poem is a little confusin to me maybe others catch it but i'd like to know what i means send me a message if you can
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Re: Its in the eyes
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:29:55 PM AEST
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| It's the darn truth, i liked this poem. I onlu understand it becasue I go through it every day! lol! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Its in the eyes
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by stargazer on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 07:01:04 PM AEST
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This poem is scary. Not in the thriller way but because you told me that once. That my eyes can tell no lies... and then you told me to tell you just how bad it really was. Looks are decieving but a smile is even more. But your eyes... they can not lie, they are nothing but the bare truth. And there are those that can not handle the truth so they refuse to see what the eyes really show. But maybe it is better of that way in the end, right?
It really shows who your real friends are and who is just a "friend." You can fool everyone with your pretty smile and gorgeous body but your eyes are the window to your soul. Do not forget that.
I love it... I'm in love with it. Absoutely superb!
Amy |
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