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Would i Be?
Contributed by
pat517
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Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 09:37:27 PM in AEST
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Would i be a fool to ask for a second chance?
Would i be a fool to ask for one more dance?
Am i blinded by the love i lost?
Or am i suffering from my choices cost?
Am i a fool for thinking of what could have been?
Am i a fool to ask for love again?
~Patrick S. Simental~
~19 January, 2011~
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Re: Would i Be?
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by poeticjestix on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 10:24:32 PM AEST
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you'd be a fool not to ask if you genuinely feel that way.
If you're just scared of being alone then history will probably repeat itself.
Either way. It's better to ask in a gentle way and know the answer for real.
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Re: Would i Be?
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by PosionIvy on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 10:28:08 AM AEST
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| good poetry:) no one is a fool to ask to love again...maybe just with someone else this time :) |
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Re: Would i Be?
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by brialuv on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 01:04:02 PM AEST
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| theres nothing wrong with asking for a 2nd chance you never know when the opportunity may arrive again, but you have to also be prepared for rejection especially if you were the one who messed up. |
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