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CRitiQue FOr proresS
Contributed by
euphoema
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Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 10:32:19 AM in AEST
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Crtique, critique, I gladly accept
Do you accept, accept?
Hopefully so, it may prevent a wreck!
I accept, I accept, your critque gladly!
It does not mean I will take it as fact
It does not mean I will not
Doors may open in my brain, new views rush out madly!
Like branches on a tree
Some continue on new paths
Some stunt, thanks to that honest critique
Express, express, aceept, feel free!
As long as the passer contains no sour roots
And holds passion for growth for himself and I
Critique he shall
And I shall accept and walk away in new boots!
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euphoema
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2011-01-20 10:32:19]
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Re: CRitiQue FOr proresS
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 03:45:41 PM AEST
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WOW. This seems. DEEP!
In a hidden way?
And you get the real speed of this poem. Fascinated. Very differently written O.O.
So different but so.. fascinating.. yea.. NICE ONE! |
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