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The Futility in Life
Contributed by
Zeberdee
on
Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 06:22:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Another dark and awful day
I wanna take off for good and get lost
Free myself from life and its decay
Wander off over the horizon at any cost
Cause things never change
You can change your clothes, hairstyle
,city, lifestyle but your old self always comes back with a smile
nothing you can do will change it, it is prearranged
Time just ticks away while we stand chained
to a self we despise, hate and spit on
Till I can only laugh cause I am so drained
Cause its all futile and I wanna be withdrawn
Disappear beneath the floor
Simply vanish here on the shore
Let the waves carry me away
And dissipate in a reef near a cay
Copyright ©
Zeberdee
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2011-01-22 18:22:35]
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Re: The Futility in Life
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by Voyager on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 11:54:48 AM AEST
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| Well written. I could feel ur anguish and trust me I have felt this as well. The despair and the need to escape comes out very well in this poem. Good write. |
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Re: The Futility in Life
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 11:43:40 PM AEST
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this poem is great I can really relate to it.
Its so true you can rearrange your whole life change everything but yourself we can not change. good write
-Daniellemarie- |
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Re: The Futility in Life
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 05:36:28 AM AEST
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| Free myself from life and its decay.....can feel the struggle throughout and know the feelings,great writing |
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Re: The Futility in Life
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 18th February 2011 @ 05:11:29 AM AEST
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| my life is not -i create |
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