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'Reality'
Contributed by
bolts
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Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 03:32:15 AM in AEST
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I read into myself and what did I see?
I saw the world as a product of me,
I saw all the people around about,
All of their actions and all of their words,
All an extension of my internal worlds,
Nothing is hidden inside my mind.
So many inputs; food, drink, sound...
Touch, taste, smell... all processed by self.
So many processes, sensations, tastes,
All categorised, ordered, sorted by my brain,
So much responsibility for fellow man,
All as one, doing, trying, best we can.
So many outputs; food, drink, sound...
Touch, taste, smell... all processed by other.
So many processes, sensations, tastes,
All categorised, ordered, sorted by your brain,
So little accountability for fellow man,
All as individuals; doing what we can.
I read into you and what do I see?
I see the world as a product of me,
I see all the people round about,
All of our actions; all of our words,
One integral melding, a unity of worlds,
Everything is hidden outside our minds.
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Re: 'Reality'
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 06:35:21 AM AEST
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| Intersting thought provoking write with a nice rhythm to it. |
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Re: 'Reality'
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by Brasco on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:23:26 AM AEST
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| very nice! |
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Re: 'Reality'
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by wallerdude on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 11:51:46 AM AEST
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| very in me |
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