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DEATH
Contributed by
fish
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Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 03:36:00 AM in AEST
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My heart skipped several beats
As i watched him caress his knife's hilt.
Suddenly numb went my feed.
Run, run my heart and head bid
But there I stood like a statue of liberty.
Darkness pressed at my shoulder
And the surrounding grew colder.
Each cut more bloody and deeper
Making him more satisfied and happier.
I tried moving but i grew stiffer.
Fast flashes and flares of fire
Seemed the sole sight my eyes sees.
It felt cold like being caked in an ice cube
Before all went bleak then black.
I could hear my heart hasting to a halt.
I started to find myself in bed
Frightened and gasping for breath.
Muscle cramped and wet with sweat
From the mere thought of death.
Surely being alive feels great
Copyright ©
fish
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2011-01-25 03:36:00]
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Re: DEATH
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by Bolts on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 07:53:53 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, actually felt myself growing tenser as I read it. Really powerful. Nice ending too. |
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Re: DEATH
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by ming on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:26:07 AM AEST
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Good...but you can ask the moderator for help with spelling, most of us have at one time or another. :)
ming |
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Re: DEATH
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 04:35:55 PM AEST
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It's good to have you back posting, friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: DEATH
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by kleetas on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 06:25:37 PM AEST
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| now go write about "life' QUICKLY!..Write about little tadpoles springing to life..yada..yada..yada.. |
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