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Running in a Circle
Contributed by
Poetic_Ramblings
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Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 01:31:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Running in a circle,
Almost out of ground
Digging deeper ditches,
And falling farther down
Past hatchets long since buried,
And memories left to rot
Were what was once important
All amounts to naught
Blinding sky of the forgotten
Consuming all my light
Futile thoughts, unwanted
Keep me awake all night
And when every word is spoken,
When all is said and done
I realize one most simple fact
False hopes better than none
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Re: Running in a Circle
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 12:43:42 AM AEST
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I like it. The third stanza breaks your rhythm a little bit, but it happens so...
In any case, keep writing.
always, abraham |
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Re: Running in a Circle
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by hmong_dude on
Tuesday, 1st February 2011 @ 04:21:03 AM AEST
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| Nice...! |
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