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puppetry
Contributed by
nomad
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 02:31:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness fallows me around extinguishing all light ive found I wait for you in emptyness hiding from the unknown bliss bring your sorrow and it's pain hiding from the truth again
look to brighter days you say As I watch the past decay i've strangled tears far to long darkness is where i place my hate take your time, contemplate speak your vows to deceive your cloaks of clever words assure I won't be your destiny
Close your mind, free your soul it matters no more speak your poison in my ear misconcepted dreams I hear devistating mental war but I'm in control
It makes you mad It makes you hate Why don't you just accept your fate You've fallowed me around to long years have made you headstrong pull your strings of puppetry no more will your toys dance or sing layed to rest my chains have been now your free to play again
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nomad
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2011-01-26 02:31:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: puppetry
(User Rating: 1 ) by RachelSixx on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 07:15:05 PM AEST (User
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beautifully dark, i love it! |
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Re: puppetry
(User Rating: 1 ) by xnickix7 on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 08:55:31 PM AEST (User
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Great piece. I like how you were able to rhyme in several of your lines. I'm very partial to that style of writing. |
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