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Kaleidoscope Dream
Contributed by
irisblue
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 05:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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She sits lost in thought, gazing out the store window
reflecting on the past days' innuendo
Her face soft and sweet, her eyes a kaleidoscope of indigo, sapphire and
utlramarine
Ignite a spark, a thought, in her mind things are not quite as they
seem
What she has wanted for so long and prayed for at night
suddenly does not seem to be out of her sights
The aching, the longing, so subtle; yet always there
caused by his presence, his magic, his hypnotic stare
He pulls her close to him, hands tremble, pulses race, their hearts
start to pound
His embrace rushes through her and captures her heart without a sound
Eyes close, lips part and give way to a kiss, the once confining reservations
instantaneously subside
With the force of new born galaxy, thier two worlds, they collide!!!!
The ground melts beneath them and ahhh the comets take flight
Suspended in time, they whirl ...no destination in sight
He undresses her with an urgency, so to allow his lips to kiss her neck and her breasts
kissing harder as he moves down, drinking in each sensual curve
She opens up and he thrusts inside...
Her erotic gasps echo distant planets, only by them to be heard
As ectasy overcame them and their beings become one,
Their passion released a heat comparable to that of the radiant sun
Copyright ©
irisblue
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2011-01-26 17:28:03]
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 06:07:56 PM AEST
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I loved this poem when you originally read it to me. Loved it when you originally posted it under your old account. Still love it!!!! One of your best!   |
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by kleetas on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 09:55:23 PM AEST
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| Would you like a cigarette,madam?...bravo!,,METHINKS we have other greatness in our midst! |
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by Peaseblossom on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 08:03:23 AM AEST
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Lovely description.
The poem really flowed, making it easy to follow along and I felt like I was in the dream.
Good one :) |
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 11:29:33 PM AEST
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Hot Hot Hot
ahhhh..... |
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th March 2015 @ 09:49:13 PM AEST
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A poet after my own heart!! I love to write about dreams and fantasies.. enjoyed this..
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 01:58:06 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, a poem so real it breathes,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 11:39:35 AM AEST
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Wow! You got my heart beating. I need a damn shower.
Most excellent; tender, sweet, dreamy, then, like a sexy verbal volcano, your poem builds in words, matching the two in it and explodes to a climactic finale'.
Bravo on this one.
Invierno |
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Re: Kaleidoscope Dream
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 21st April 2017 @ 08:06:45 PM AEST
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| What a night x |
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