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Sweet Surrender
Contributed by
irisblue
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Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 05:35:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The ominous stillness engulfs the room and deafens my ears
amplifying my anger, my hollowness, my fears
I lay frozen in bed, fist clenched, heart pounding, lips tightly sealed.
The voice in my head screams out hoping he'll hear.
The tears start to fall penetrating my skin; yielding endless echoes that pellet my soul
What happened to the brave girl... the woman with fairytale dreams and significant goals?
Like Russian roulette playing a game with my life,
my disease taunts "this time will be different, this time it will be fine".
But just ONE drink and the game's over, time's up, I will die
Should I give up, let alcohol be my master or SURRENDER and let HIM be my guide?
Oh GOD I can feel you .............yes I feel some hope inside.
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Re: Sweet Surrender
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 06:22:50 PM AEST
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| That was captivating. I assume it is about the battle against alcoholism. Giving up really is such sweet surrender, but also one of the worst things you can do for yourself. |
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Re: Sweet Surrender
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 26th July 2015 @ 10:46:17 AM AEST
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Masterful outline and expose' on a crippling problem that I share with you. To know you chose God is inspiring to me.
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