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angel
Contributed by
wallerdude
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Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 11:58:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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he is a ghost of sweet delight
at 1st she dazzled my thought and sight
a gift from the gods, to me sent
this moment an eternal ornament.
we met across a drunken view
an angel, yet a women too
her eyes as stars that forever glow
the love she gives, youll never know.
yet ill treasure every hair and breath
like a traveller between life and death
because i never expected someone like you
some one so weird, so awesome as you.
and i know forever babe, ill treat you right.
you are my angel...in the night
Copyright ©
wallerdude
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2011-01-27 11:58:18]
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Re: angel
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by irisblue on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 06:05:06 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this, I really like the first stanza, awesome to find true love!!! |
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Re: angel
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by kleetas on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 01:31:43 AM AEST
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| so weird,so awesome as you"-nice juxaposition. |
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Re: angel
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:43:49 AM AEST
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| Great write keep up the good work |
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Re: angel
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by hmong_dude on
Tuesday, 1st February 2011 @ 04:06:13 AM AEST
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| Nice...! |
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