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No idea.
Contributed by
Disasterology
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Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 09:34:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I felt so cold, lying on my side.
In the same clothes from the very last night.
I dont think im doing anything right.
Youve got me so cold on the inside.
I put these words on my skin.
A million and one notes, every one written to you.
Im an optimist, but only in a perfect world.
Im think im too stained with all the negativity from all the people in my way.
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Disasterology
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2011-01-27 21:34:24]
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Re: No idea.
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by kleetas on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 10:04:42 PM AEST
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| i hope your idea in part two is a warmer fuzzier fireside romance by a raring fire? |
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Re: No idea.
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 12:56:37 AM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: No idea.
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 01:41:58 AM AEST
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| mmm I love the line "i put these words on my skin." It is thought provoking. Nice poem. Welcome. |
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