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The Tree
Contributed by
Parishrut
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Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:22:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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One day I was walking along a sea shore
On which played the waters, so sprightly they were
And as they splashed, they sang a song
It was a lovely, enchanting song
Gratifying my heart, my mind, my soul
They sang for me, for themselves, for all
Then to me, reached a fragrance
So profound it was, that it made me follow
And led me to another sea
A sea of flowers, a sea of colour
Green, orange, purple they were
And of all the colors I could think of
They signified the beauty of life
Standing among them, I could not help but smile
Out of the blue, above the field;
Lightning flashed and thunder rung
It could be heard loud and clear
It heralded the arrival of rain
Which washed away my sins
And swept away my fears
The rain did stop but reminded me of
How wonderful the nature is
But just as I was returning through the woods
Came on the wind distant sound
It was the malicious cutting of trees
The trees could not wail
The trees could not cry
But deep inside my heart I could hear
Their cries for help, their fear for death
It made me think for a moment in sorrow-
The Eden that I saw today
Would it be there for me tomorrow?
Copyright ©
Parishrut
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2011-01-28 02:22:23]
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Re: The Tree
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:31:19 AM AEST
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| nature is a beautiful thing, and you captured it very well. One of humanities biggest problems is that in order to survive, we must destroy things, and often those things are beautiful. |
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Re: The Tree
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by seshmark on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 04:01:00 AM AEST
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| awesome hai g |
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Re: The Tree
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Sounds like you just discovered raw, natural talent of writing poetry.
That's how I do it. It's talent on loan from God. I give him the glory, I'm just the willing vessel that picks up the pen to capture it.
good writing and again, welcome.
Blessings,
emy
An awesome write. |
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Re: The Tree
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by AngelFox on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 02:00:29 PM AEST
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| Continue, continue, continue writing! You are a diamond in the rough! And nature is your playground. |
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