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A powerful tool in my hands.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 05:08:44 AM in AEST
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I have a powerful tool in my hands,
Not acquired the way I'd planned,
For many years I'd coveted this grace,
I've longed for this sanctuary,
At peace in my space.
Couldn't tell you how it occurred,
To say it was by will, would be absurd,
But I've found the road to the man I want to be,
I see my past faults, hold no sway over me.
Pessimism, regret, no self respect,
No confidence, always angry,
There lay my obstinacy,
Twenty years in the learning,
Persistently yearning,
For empathy,
Lost dignity,
Eternal intimacy,
And adoration.
So now with elation,
Grasp my creation,
Take hold of my future,
I am my own suture,
Healer of this rift,
Receiver of this gift,
Now free of me,
Released to be,
What I want you see,
A worthy man,
Not as I planned,
A powerful tool in my hands.
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huwbeauty
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2011-01-28 05:08:44]
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Re: A powerful tool in my hands.
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by duff on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 01:58:56 PM AEST
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Inspirational write indeed. A constant rhythm beating throughout a confession of a young man finding his way in life. Terrific writing that brings a smile to my face when reading your work. Well done
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Re: A powerful tool in my hands.
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 08:50:52 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
blessings,
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Re: A powerful tool in my hands.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 02:38:44 AM AEST
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| Very strong writing. The rhythm and rhyme throughout is stunningly executed. I really enjoy your work and this is amongst your best. |
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