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(It's Just a Word) Something Only Heard
Contributed by
DoubleS
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Tuesday, 1st February 2011 @ 03:01:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This poem changes a lot with the number of syllables in each line... But if read and "mind speak" at the right pace, it's barely noticeable. Please Comment and tell me what you think!!! This is also my shortest poem, so if you think it needs more detail, I just might agree lol.
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Love is just a word
With so many meanings
It's something you feel
From the very beginning
The one that I love
Is special in a way
The one I think about
Every night and day
She's not the hottest
Or the most perfect girl
But I'd give her my life
And trust her with my world
Like everyone else
She would have her bad days
I would help her get through
In my own sort of way
I'd talk and see her laugh
Calmly and softly
As she cracks a smile
I thought what could this be
I thought it was love
But love is just a word
For a special emotion
Something only heard
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DoubleS
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Re: (It's Just a Word) Something Only Heard
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 1st February 2011 @ 08:11:19 PM AEST
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| Shows a lot of love and caring, well written. Good poem! |
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Re: (It's Just a Word) Something Only Heard
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by wazza on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2011 @ 10:47:06 AM AEST
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| Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: (It's Just a Word) Something Only Heard
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by scottstone on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 02:05:06 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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