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extreme
Contributed by
DanielleMarie
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2011 @ 11:09:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I live in a black and white world
Im all in or it's nothing at all.
It is an extreme way of being
an extreme being I am. I push
real hard until something breaks.
Some would call this the brink
of insanity, I call it an ordinary
day in my stilettos. When Im
happy it's just a phase of hypo
mania and when Im sad I am
real sad. It's like a word stuck
on the tip of your tongue, you
just can't say it but you know
it. That is my life a whole
Kaleidoscope of pictures I
just can't remember how it felt.
How it feels to just live it, just
breathe it in with out sabotaging
it. I will never be able to comfortably
just be another girl in a room full of
people. Forever I will be the one feeling
awfully awkward twirling my straw in
my drink, and when I go home I'll feel
more alone than ever.
Copyright ©
DanielleMarie
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2011-02-03 23:09:15]
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Re: extreme
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by wallerdude on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 11:43:44 AM AEST
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| great depth! like it a lot! especially the end |
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Re: extreme
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by RyanS on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 06:18:18 PM AEST
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| wow this is very sad but thats why i love reading it. good luck and best wishes! |
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