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past the eyes and demons
Contributed by
wallerdude
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Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 11:49:26 AM in AEST
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as we watched the waves
crash upon the shore
i looked in her eyes
and in my eyes she saw
the demons im trying to keep at bay
i said theyd be gone baby if you stay
she clenched at my hand
i held so tight
id seen my inner demons
had given her a fright
i assured her, its her that i want
on her i depend
and that i knew this was love
'cause i never pretend!!
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wallerdude
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2011-02-08 11:49:26]
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Re: past the eyes and demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tomboy on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 04:38:39 PM AEST
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| Was very intresting poem, keep it up |
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Re: past the eyes and demons
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by cssdman on
Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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| I liked it, but it seemed like you had more to say, that you needed to open up more and talk more about what she saw in you. |
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