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Cant You See. I Am Not Blind!
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 12:13:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tell me I am wrong. I Will accept it. In my years apart.
Now tell me wrong but I dont quite think
That you both understand
I feel the need to tell you
I am still on this land.
Ive not been blinded by this magnificent love
I can see clear reality
I can cope with or without him
But he makes everything so happy.
It sounds love sick and silly
Im sure you could say this is just a teenage dream
But I pray to god every night
That in 50 years time WE will be seen.
Things go wrong and my trust plummets
but I never trusted anyone else
My family is the only exception
And now is he and his heart of wealth.
I know you say you dont care about the exams
I know, sometimes I say I do
But all I really care about
Is my girl, my family now him too.
Im almost certain you would rather I found a lawyer
Someone of class and posh uproar
But those people, are not my people
My people didnt exist in this disgusting world.
But it seems to be I am proven wrong
And theres more than just existing
There is love from someone, not your family
And now I feel, I am living.
Throw this in my face if it doesnt work out
Tell me I was stupid and wrong
Tell me everyone else was right
And that they knew all along
But until we both become apart
Which I hope will never succeed
Then please, please, dont tear us apart
Each others company isnt greed.
I could spend each waken minute around him
I could sleep with him until I did die
because I feel safe and protected
Unlike around my other side.
When Im with you all
I feel, know Im the strongest here
If we become attacked alone, Ill have to save us
That is my main devils fear.
It sounds stupid ok, I know it does
Just read and understand
That Im safe and under his protection
When we are hand in hand.
Tears will fall of course
its the loved ones we hurt
We will treat each other like kings and queens
Then treat each other like dirt.
But everything is the way life goes
And I believe god will guide me right
he will take me out of any dark patches
And show me towards the light.
So its just a poem to trying and get through
Im not stupid, nor am I blind
I am still her, always will be, whatever
I am one of a kind.
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Re: Cant You See. I Am Not Blind!
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by monkeylove on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:31:53 PM AEST
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| i felt this deep down...its very nice and emotional :) i like it |
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