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The Black Forest
Contributed by
nonefound
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Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 03:14:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Suffering, sorrow, pain In my heart it stays the same Solitude a solace,alone a deep despair Along the path of life Lightly trodden my path alone I walk Knowledge reaches out , darkness all about Memories like chasms of light Hang baubles shining bright To be a glimpse for me
Lonely shadow in black Yet not alone, figure walks Solitude and dark Wraps around like a cloak Comfort and peace Tranquility in its beauty Perfect peace, knowledge seek The find held in a bauble bright
Feeling not of despair, it no longer ventures there Calmness, not of sorrow,not of pain Along the path they disappear Fear does not loom, the path you walk alone Oneness, whole,apart of nature, love is found Creatures, air,earth,on the path abounds Love comes,you are part,of some vast life Your path you walk,now never alone
From the suffering beyond and above The torment, pain endured now Of which no man will ever know Your path and destiny you walked alone Questions ever,never answered From the very pain of your soul
All you have endured now it continues on In its place to be given love of creatures Big and small, nature,beauty can not escape The feelings now as you walk alone, yet not
Alone yet not, a figure dressed in black Do I hear or see,feel or breathe, aware and know Yet not been told, apart I walk, yet with you still Born from suffering you cast me out Now I walk a path,where one small feather falls A breeze upon my face,a glimpse, a smile Tranquility and peace walks with me,along the dark path given to me. With my memories, held in bright baubles of light. nonefound.
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Re: The Black Forest
(User Rating: 1 ) by nikki13 on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 10:24:23 PM AEST (User
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wow i really felt it. very good work. i think ill give your poem a 10. its very descriptive and dark at the same time. also very beautiful. |
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