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Sometines
Contributed by
spike
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Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the traveller
takes to the road alone,
in search of a path
or a place unknown:
drawn along the winding track,
sometimes they won't ever
come back
out to sea in
boats of hope,
against tides and storms
with sails and rope:
over the waters
they will roam;
sometimes the sailor
doesn't come home
drifters drift,
explorers seek
the next best thing
or the highest peak:
the outward urge
is what they yearn;
sometimes the seekers
never return.
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spike
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2011-02-10 04:25:30]
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Re: Sometines
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by poeticjestix on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 02:56:34 PM AEST
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| I like the rhythm and repetition of this. |
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Re: Sometines
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 05:09:19 PM AEST
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| wow. i really like this..i can see myself in it somewhere..i'm the one always searching though, always wanting to leave, and sometimes, never coming back.. |
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Re: Sometines
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:28:34 PM AEST
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that is very beautiful. I was almost hypnotized by this poem.
There is no greater show of love, than the test of time, and waiting for someone.
You captured that essence perfectly. |
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Re: Sometines
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by spud on
Thursday, 17th February 2011 @ 06:03:06 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Now I see what I've missed, after being away from
the site for so long.
Another trademark piece of verse - short and to
the point, and brilliantly expressed.
And I ask myself ..... why has this poem had so few
reads??
Tommy
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