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Lustful Vengeance
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:01:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Holding purgatory in one hand,
And salvation in the other,
Watching her feelings pass,
As he becomes my lovers lover,
Holding just a thread,
Is still holding on,
Fading away I will watch,
Until the day it is gone,
Walking the path of vengeance,
Head low thoughts held within,
destroyed from inside but soon they will pay,
Smoldering rage love spread so thin,
Release all the pain revenge it begins.
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deusdeira
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2011-02-11 04:01:23]
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Re: Lustful Vengeance
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by RowenM on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 06:14:29 AM AEST
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"Head low...thoughts held within"
Really liked that phrase.
And the whole poem is dark enough.
I liked it :D |
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Re: Lustful Vengeance
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by cssdman on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 12:04:29 PM AEST
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| Deep man, I've been there. I feel your pain bro. |
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Re: Lustful Vengeance
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by purplestary on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 01:15:30 PM AEST
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| deep, dark, and real..awsome write! i love it. |
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Re: Lustful Vengeance
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 10:29:28 PM AEST
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Nice!!!! I have been at this very point in my life a few times over and thats all you can think of is revenge!! NIce capture of emotion here!!! Keep writing and sharing always
respectfully,
Dana |
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Re: Lustful Vengeance
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 07:31:35 PM AEST
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| Nice one. I definitely relate to the feelings of wanting to get revenge and it makes for great poems. I've been there, been tempted but then I figure, alas, karma will kick in...sooner or later. But again, makes a great poem...or story. |
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