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mind
Contributed by
monkeylove
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Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 05:04:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the sky is blue
my mind is clear
the things ive said
have brought me fear
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2011-02-11 17:04:16]
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Re: mind
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 11:56:20 AM AEST
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| I like the contrast of the sky being blue and your mind being clear (sounds peaceful) and how you feel fearful at the same time of what you've said. |
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Re: mind
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 03:32:25 AM AEST
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| I also love the contrast. It remind the reader, that even when there is beauty, there can be fear. Fear is so often associated with darkness or ugliness. But fear is an emotion, and it can happen at any time. |
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