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Crazy displayed.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 04:12:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I bought a smile, from you today,
Didn't cost much,
Still couldn't pay,
Crazed and dismayed,
At my misfortune,
I got credit,
Payed with illusion.
I sought a while, which to delay,
To deal with such,
Still couldn't say,
Fazed and dismayed,
I am uncertain,
I've not said it,
Left with confusion.
I fought denial,futile display,
There is the crux,
Sure that's the way,
Crazy displayed,
I've raised the curtain,
Know I meant it,
That's my conclusion.
I aught, I bought, saving grace,
Can't leave to luck,
I will not face,
My future waylaid,
Shake this burden,
Gonna rent it,
Then sell this version.
I thought, I sought, one last place,
Within your look,
I am displaced,
Senses are flayed,
I'm still hurting,
Still can't vent it,
My love, my passion.
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huwbeauty
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2011-02-12 04:12:08]
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Re: Crazy displayed.
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by Dirkj on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 04:34:15 AM AEST
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| Really like it Huw, had to read it 3 times , but went to a concert last night and i'm still fast asleep lol well done |
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Re: Crazy displayed.
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by StacyLynnG on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 12:36:29 AM AEST
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| beautiful! |
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Re: Crazy displayed.
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 01:51:43 AM AEST
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| A really nice piece, as ever with your work, it is thought provoking and very easy on the mind. Well done. |
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