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In red
Contributed by
DanielleMarie
on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 10:06:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lost and never found
consume me whole.
Abuse what you love
neglect what you need
and take what you should
run from. Blood stained and
tormented I wait for this to
dictate the rest of my life.
Wine and dine and die baby
wine and dine and die with me.
I will wait in red for you, I will
spray your pillows in my perfume
so you will never forget I was there.
I leave a trail of sins for you, and you
will fall in to this trap.
Copyright ©
DanielleMarie
... [
2011-02-12 22:06:06]
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Re: In red
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by nikki13 on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 11:06:01 PM AEST
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| i like your poem it kinda has rythem to it well in my eyes any ways. very nice job |
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Re: In red
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 07:20:20 AM AEST
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Very sad but very powerful.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: In red
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 03:23:54 AM AEST
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| Very raw, and very beautiful. May you find happiness on this day, and not sadness. |
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