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True Beauty
Contributed by
StacyLynnG
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Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 11:48:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A glimmer of morns first blush,
Brings birds songs and breaks a hush.
Brilliantly, it sets the hills aglow,
Glistening against the streamline flow.
The spring breeze refreshing and brisk,
Not a cloud in the sky daring to risk.
Trees shiver a vibrant green,
Beyond the hills is a world unseen.
Flowers bloom by the old sod trail,
And all in one moment,
Life seems to prevail.
Copyright ©
StacyLynnG
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2011-02-12 23:48:11]
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Re: True Beauty
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by nikki13 on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 11:57:16 PM AEST
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Re: True Beauty
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by Voyager on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 09:52:19 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
Here's my fav line:
"Not a cloud in the sky daring to risk"
Well done! |
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Re: True Beauty
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 10:58:51 AM AEST
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"And all in one moment, life seems to prevail"
Excellent. |
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Re: True Beauty
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by JRLatin77 on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 08:05:56 PM AEST
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Stacy this is certainly a beautiful poem, not only does it flow nicely, it captures the simple seconds of nature we sometimes ignore. Well written and a great contribution to poetry.
Thank you Stacy
J.R. |
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Re: True Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 09:54:18 PM AEST
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| Soft gentle breeze....so pretty and relaxing. :) |
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