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Hollow Existence
Contributed by
zeberdee
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Friday, 18th February 2011 @ 05:11:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Words words I cant find any
Standing here frozen in society
While other people are canny
I am dripping with anxiety
With every glance clawing at me
And losing a bit on every degree
I cant move from this state of mind
I am trapped in this thoughtprison
While other people act kind
I close my eyes to listen
but hear only a hollow existence
Echoing forever into the distance
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zeberdee
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2011-02-18 05:11:07]
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Re: Hollow Existence
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Friday, 18th February 2011 @ 08:00:47 AM AEST
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| Very well done. This rings a bell with me. Your words are clear and easy to understand but this poem has an underlying sadness about it. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Hollow Existence
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by lonelyguy92 on
Friday, 18th February 2011 @ 01:13:17 PM AEST
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| Loved it, I could find myself in this.... good write |
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