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moments
Contributed by
YSD
on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 07:13:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You know what my favorite part was?
The part right before the kiss
You know its coming
And you don't want to say anything.
We
Seemed as though
Time had spared us to stop
In that moment forever
Paralyzed
Like two statues
But alive
Afraid that you might scare the moment away
Like a bird
That might take flight
Youd hold on to my hand
Stroking it with your thumb
Our fingers intertwined
I could feel your breathing on my cheek
I loved you
But more than that
I loved
Us
Every time I saw you
It was like a movie
Im waiting for the next best scene
That is
When we meet again
Did you miss me?
I know I did
Copyright ©
YSD
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2011-02-19 19:13:16]
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Re: moments
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 02:40:04 AM AEST
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| Although a sad piece, this reverberates with a certain strength. This sums up perfectly the feeling of really missing someone you love. Well done. |
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Re: moments
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 06:25:48 PM AEST
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| liked how yoir talked the moments, was very well done |
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Re: moments
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 05:07:10 AM AEST
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| i wish i had this but my life is a horror movie -loved it |
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