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Purging the darkness
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 01:50:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A tempest runs across my soul,
Ripped apart and shattered gold,
So take my hand and feel this pain,
And shed with me these tears of shame,
Theres sadness in your deep green eyes,
But when you fall then you must rise,
and stare your demons in the face,
And slay them with your moral grace,
With no regret no sign of fear,
Come my friend we shed no tears,
For evil it deserves to die,
For living such a hollow lie.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2011-02-20 01:50:29]
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 02:36:50 AM AEST
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| Deep dark and brilliant! I love the flow and the rhyme is simply divine. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by Aspirant on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 03:05:14 AM AEST
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Very nice flow to these words.
... I don't think it's so easy to cut oneself in two and destroy the evil part. |
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 04:16:42 AM AEST
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| Brilliant, really deep and dark,just how I like it. |
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 04:20:51 PM AEST
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| very strong and dark, but beautiful nonetheless. i love it. |
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by duff on
Thursday, 24th February 2011 @ 11:04:31 AM AEST
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Your words bring a delightful and creepy feeling through the entire poem. The darkness you have created is bold and powerful. A haunting write that is very well done. I especially like the title.
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 25th February 2011 @ 05:09:48 AM AEST
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| you say you like my work there trying to kick me off how sad would that make u feel :( |
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by poeticjestix on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 04:34:53 PM AEST
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walks the cliche tightrope and makes it to the other side.
Like a really good new song- sounds just like an old one that never existed.
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 09:53:01 PM AEST
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WOW!!! What an awesome piece of poetry here!! I loved this 100%!!
Keep writing and sharing Always,
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by petulinka on
Monday, 23rd May 2011 @ 10:51:20 AM AEST
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| great one!!!..so simple easy still so powerful!!! |
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Re: Purging the darkness
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 30th July 2011 @ 08:58:41 PM AEST
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| you slayed evil with your words....brilliantly written.... |
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