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Strength and Hope
Contributed by
weirdiscool
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Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 08:35:44 AM in AEST
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Words were said that we probably didnt mean
Promises were made that we both wanted and still try to keep
People say, "....happens, life goes on."
But how can you just go on when you don't know where to start?
Since everything happened, I've never felt so alone in my entire life
I was so used to having you around
Having that shoulder to lean on
Having that hand to pull me out
Now that your not around, I'm just trying to cope with life
As always, I still have hope that we'll look back at this and laugh
Cause in my heart you'll always be my one and only best friend:/
I miss you too, stranger.
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Re: Strength and Hope
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by ammar on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 10:40:34 AM AEST
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I like the poem for its simplicity of ideas and its very natural flow.
Keep writing
Peace
Ammar |
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Re: Strength and Hope
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 05:51:57 PM AEST
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Wow, this a beautifully, sad write.
One can feel the words you speak.
Amazing write.
big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Strength and Hope
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by pepa on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 08:11:19 AM AEST
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| Isn't it funny how sometimes the most important person in your life can feel like a complete stranger. Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing... |
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