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End of a Familiar Romance
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 06:48:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I apologize if it's too short, I've recently been writing poems in my cell phone's "notes" function, so I don't forget good pieces or lines that come to me, especially at work.
What is love?
Can we be sure?
It's a word without
any single meaning
and expressed in or by
the context of our
very own emotions.
For me it isn't known
but it's felt. I feel it
every time you look
at me, and all I can do
is smile out of happiness.
I feel it as I hold you
While you slowly drift away
and start to fall asleep.
I felt it when we had played
hard to get, even though
we had both been gotten.
I felt it when we looked
at the stars, and picked
one to be only ours.
One that was unique
(just like you).
I felt it when we kissed
and when we made love
and I felt still...
When you left me.
Copyright ©
xHeathenx
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2011-02-21 06:48:01]
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Re: End of a Familiar Romance
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by Willofree on
Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 08:50:56 AM AEST
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Many would say the more succinct the poem th;e more pround the message .
enoyed the emotion and feelings iin your poem;. Thanks for sharin g
will
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Re: End of a Familiar Romance
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 01:48:17 PM AEST
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awesome! I like the trick of switching present to past tense.nasty . It worked beautifully.
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Re: End of a Familiar Romance
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:40:54 AM AEST
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| yep , got to love it, nicely done |
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Re: End of a Familiar Romance
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by OnceAnAngel on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:49:53 AM AEST
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this is a good one. i admire the way you conveyed a positive feel even though she left...
Love.. to me, its selfless. |
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