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Sirens of the world
Contributed by
blended76
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sirens at sea swirling below my feet congregated in luminous masses their enticing sounds pierce my soul blind to their treachery eyes fixed on the horizon hues of pink brush against my salt drenched lips their allure transcends the vibrations in the sky a beauty beyond visual the yearn for this perfection to seep through my skin has strengthened with every toxic breath I take the desire for something that is tied to such destruction is an enigma The human creature is no match to the sirens of the world humans are emotional and translucent driven by instant gratification the sirens wait patiently with their promise of escape we rely on the sirens of the world unable to cope on our own the moment we let go they pull you to their unimaginable depths
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Re: Sirens of the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 07:04:07 PM AEST (User
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Deep. Understanding what makes us weak is what will one day make us strong. Great write! |
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Re: Sirens of the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by ABM on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 07:21:46 PM AEST (User
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your wonderful descriptions and tone brought this poem to life. beautiful.
thank you for sharing! |
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Re: Sirens of the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 06:15:15 AM AEST (User
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nice |
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Re: Sirens of the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 04:04:44 PM AEST (User
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beautifully written, i love it! great job! |
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