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Goodbye
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 05:21:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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She closed the gate
He looked one more time
He squeezed her hand
She gave him a pat on the back
Do you remember he said
Our first rose planted here
The front gate
How Squeaky it was
She looked at him - and said
You know it's time
We've done all we can
What's gone , is gone
She turned left
He turned right
Each one to find
A Home
With a squeaky gate
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-02-23 05:21:31]
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Re: Goodbye
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 08:26:24 AM AEST
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Ouch. Made me think of the part of my life that was lime that...
Sad words. Great write |
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Re: Goodbye
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 08:27:30 AM AEST
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| Like that* |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 09:28:22 AM AEST
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| very sad, but very well written. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 03:51:28 PM AEST
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| Sad, but beautiful nonetheless. I love it. |
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