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Dirty
Contributed by
exiled
on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
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(Dirty)
standing here all alone in my mind
all of these thoughts racing
making me feel so blind
why do these tears
fall from my eyes.
all this *****!
you rip it at me!
tearing away everything!
I thought we would be!
you make me feel so dirty!
so dirty, dirty, dirty, dirty, DIRTY!
standing here all alone in my mind
all of these thoughts racing
making me feel so blind
why do these tears
fall from my eyes
why so blind.
why do I bleed for you!
standing in the mists
of your beautiful eyes!
why do I feel so denied!
all this hate bottled up inside!
you make me feel so dirty!
so dirty, dirty dirty, dirty, DIRTY!
standing here all alone,
all alone, shaking the dirt
from my mind.
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Re: Dirty
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:04:32 PM AEST
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try taking a bath. Ha Ha Ha.
Nawtee One |
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Re: Dirty
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:31:21 AM AEST
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that says so much sam, thats amazing....you write so beautifully...
Lindsey |
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Re: Dirty
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:09:04 AM AEST
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| interesting and a lot of truth in there... the whole beginning forms a great shape, justa thought:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Dirty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:47:29 PM AEST
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| great poem keep up the good work.Hopefully you'll have something happy to write about next time. |
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