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A Hummingbird's Wing
Contributed by
Breezy
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Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 04:44:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"There are places in the heart that do not yet exist;
suffering has to enter in for them to come to be. ~ Leon Bloy
~ * ~
Long strands of light
wrap themselves in the dark of night
and they know not the way or the right
Only the colour of reaction
the unspoken rule of attraction
And in the middle of creation,
he sweeps her feet from the cold dark void
spilling the heart he had tried to avoid
If only there could exist a hope
to catch the moon with lasso and rope
But there is only the colour of reaction
the unspoken rule of attraction
a centre where life is merely refraction
When love is just a hummingbirds wing
And you start to wonder why
You lock your heart without a key
(Forgive me if I cry)
~ * ~
Copyright ©
Breezy
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2011-02-27 04:44:07]
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 01:41:02 PM AEST
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soulful write as always your writing touches the heart
Shari |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by shelby on
Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 02:45:24 PM AEST
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I hardky am online these days but I am glad I had a moment to stop. Iv missed you so much.
This is so pretty. Hope you are doing ok?
Hugs
Shall |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 05:17:12 PM AEST
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| A surreal journey. Great poem! |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 12:17:52 AM AEST
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| This has got to be one of the best poems I have read in a very long time! Pretty much puts me beyond words that seem to do it any justice...but there they are. Truly stunning. |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by Mando on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 01:03:16 PM AEST
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very original short and to the point reminds me of a love that iam experincing now maybe i can borrow that rope and lasso this love of mine, and fly away on
a hummingbirds wing |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by Anoo on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 03:53:09 AM AEST
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The way you flex the lang into verses is admirably unique. Beautiful beyond words.
Anoo |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by NightOwl61 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 10:42:25 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Good choice of a quote as well. I like the short, succinct lines and the quick rhythm. Well penned. |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 01:04:02 PM AEST
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Hmmm...let me see...
I)Soul baring depth of heart...CHECK
II)Wonderfully choreographed format...CHECK
III)Lyrical dance of words & meaning...CHECK
IV)Just Beautiful...CHECK
It's like homecoming w/ everything being warmly familiar...
OneLove~me
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by spud on
Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 07:39:06 AM AEST
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Hi Breezy,
Why (I ask myself) have I not read and
commented on this poem before now.
I confess I don't visit the site as often as I
used to but when I do I'm usually able to
read and comment on a few gems. But I'm
here now and have allowed this masterpiece
to wash over me with its style and
sophistication and its ever-enduring subject
matter. This is not just a gem, it's liquid
gold.
Tommy
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 05:52:00 PM AEST
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Wow friend, I wonder how I've been missing your work.
I think about you from time to time.
Great write.
Blessings,
Emy |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 05:46:00 AM AEST
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| i like this easy to read and true |
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Re: A Hummingbird's Wing
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 08:37:31 AM AEST
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written as the flight of the hummingbird..a short flutter of beauty that leaves you satisfied and filled with wonder at witnessing its being. Great write my friend. In the land of enjoyment reading your works. ND.
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