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Feet Fail Me Not
Contributed by
ChrisCroft
on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 02:45:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Feet Fail Me Not
As i sit not knowing if Im truly awake,
or if Im in some form of purgatory
the air that I breathe seems to be laden
my heart seems to have grown comatose
Im alone, walls broken,
feet fail me not
I persist, not through any choice of my own
but because there is no other alternative
as i seek a break, a chance, an opportunity
to break this chain of sorrow
i force myself to see an end to my misery
carry me away from this place
carry me to where I can breathe
carry my weight without falter
i will not stumble any longer
feet fail me not
Copyright ©
ChrisCroft
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2011-03-02 14:45:26]
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Re: Feet Fail Me Not
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by DrcGaimer on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 02:54:38 PM AEST
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| Wow, pretty impressive for a first poem. You're a natural. |
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Re: Feet Fail Me Not
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 08:05:03 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Just pick up the pen and create word pictures with us.
Awesome .
Great job.
Blessings,
emy
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