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I see you, I see me
Contributed by
Yosif-Wish
on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 07:31:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I see you, I see me
I see love, I see hate
How can I be selfish
When there's me all around
Do you see me in yourself
Do you feel what I feel
How can I love myself
Without loving you
Is it a paradox
Or is it all an illusion
Do I really love myself
Do I really love you
Am I dreaming
Do I let you slip into the night
Will I wake to find I don't care
Did I ever care
Yes, I do care
I see you, I see me
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Yosif-Wish
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2011-03-03 07:31:41]
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Re: I see you, I see me
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by pepa on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 09:57:22 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of that saying; what you dislike most in another person, is what you dislike most about yourself. Your poem inspires reflection. Thank you... |
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Re: I see you, I see me
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by vivacious on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 03:10:24 PM AEST
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| empathy is a difficult thing |
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Re: I see you, I see me
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 04:34:00 PM AEST
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I really like this as it portrayed deep insight to one's self and one another. Although this didn't conventionally rhyme, it still conveyed something meaningful. And I agree with your proverb "empathy inspires kindness." Nowadays people often forget that. Well done...
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: I see you, I see me
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 08:07:26 PM AEST
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| Well... Now I see you, and me, and understand the paradoxil. Very interesting. |
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Re: I see you, I see me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 09:27:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very thought provoking write.
Good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: I see you, I see me
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 08:03:57 AM AEST
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Very deep and insightsful poem dear friend. We are our brothers' keepers and accountab le how we feel and act towards them.
Excellent work
Elizabeth |
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