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Ozone Layer
Contributed by
Mando
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Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 12:39:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Orange moons
collides in the midst of crimson skies
underneath a haze of purple mountain tops,a blackberry patch
resides.
As the sun continues to shine down below
echoes from raindrops falls into to the distance.
Awaiting paths,rivers,and streams flows like the nile
While i escape into this imaginary paradise time continues to pass
somewhat like the moments decending from a hour glass.
Conflicts between Mother Nature,and Father Time has become a
frequent series of unbalanced phenominons.
The once inevitable ozone layer has become measurments to the
twilight zone.
Vanishing but far from forgotten. Our world has now become a dream
of tomorrow exposing reality
Copyright ©
Mando
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2011-03-03 12:39:20]
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Re: Ozone Layer
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by vivacious on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 03:37:12 PM AEST
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| i love this. you created a beautiful scene-scape. |
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Re: Ozone Layer
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 4th March 2011 @ 12:31:57 AM AEST
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Great poem, good imagery I just wish the people of the world could find a solution that works, I'm not positive of anything anymore I'm not sure if the world will ever be able to be like it's past self like everything we are to only dwell in the past be stuck in the present and hopes for the future.
great write made me think I haven't had time for that lately thank you
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