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a state of unchanging change
Contributed by
vivacious
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Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 03:38:06 PM in AEST
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i feel like a child.
a fear worn child who has seen too much,
unable to relay my feelings
or show my colors in a positive light.
i've changed,
but i'm unable to understand change.
so it is as if i have not changed.
what is change when you can't experience it.
they continue.
i'm in limbo
no end game, just change
and waiting to see what it brings
or doesn't bring.
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vivacious
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2011-03-03 15:38:06]
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Re: a state of unchanging change
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by Yosif-Wish on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 04:07:16 PM AEST
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| fantastic, captured a fear of the unknown future and confusing present so well. thats what i got out of it anyway, great writing! |
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Re: a state of unchanging change
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 05:32:22 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
One thing you can definitely count on change whether you want it or not.
good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: a state of unchanging change
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 11:30:04 PM AEST
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| Change: a great gift or a chinese proverb, it is and will be what you make it. well done |
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Re: a state of unchanging change
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by eggflipper on
Saturday, 5th March 2011 @ 06:48:57 AM AEST
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| Very good. Choas in the face of innocence seem unfair. But there is maturity in patience, well captured |
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Re: a state of unchanging change
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 02:40:09 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
You captured alot of thought in this write.
Yes everyday is a change and we need to adapt though it is a difficult thing to do.
Michelle |
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